Zen Koan Writing Series #7: Storyteller’s Zen

Storyteller’s Zen

Encho was a famous storyteller. His tales of love stirred the hearts of his listeners. When he narrated a story of war, it was as if the listeners themselves were in the field of battle.

One day Encho met Yamaoka Tesshu, a layman who had almost embraced masterhood of Zen. “I understand,” said Yamaoka, “you ar the best storyteller in out land and that you make people cry or laugh at will. Tell me my favorite story of the Peach Boy. When I was a little tot I used to sleep beside my mother, and she often related this legend. In the middle of the story I would fall asleep. Tell it to me just as my mother did.”

Encho dared not attempt this. He requested time to study. Several months later he went to Yamaoka and said: “Please give me the opportunity to tell you the story.”

“Some other day,” answered Yamaoka.

Encho was keenly disappointed. He studied further and tried again. Yamaoka rejected him many times. When Encho would start to talk Yamaoka would stop him, saying: “You are not yet like my mother.”

It took Encho five years to be able to tell Yamaoka the legend as his mother had told it to him.

In this way, Yamaoka imparted Zen to Encho.

My Musings

When we write, we become storytellers. Whether fiction, nonfiction, or poetry, we are charged with telling the best story possible in the best way for that story. We may be masters at telling a certain genre of story. When attempting a new genre, we have to learn new techniques to portray that story in the best possible light. We also gain a new audience, with new expectations and desires when listening to our story.

Writing Applications

Know your audience. Although you may be writing for yourself, it is best to have at least an inkling of the people who might read your story. What are their needs? Do they just want an entertaining story to pass the time? Or would they prefer a insightful work with many twists and turns? Perhaps they are looking for a more informative work with a strong, clear message.

If you don’t have direct access to your audience, the best way to determine what they want is by reading others’ stories. You can see what writing conventions are accepted by readers, and which ones seem overdone. It may seem like a lot of extra work, but the results will be seen clearly in your writing.

7 Responses to “Zen Koan Writing Series #7: Storyteller’s Zen”

  1. Michele Says:

    Great job, Kim! You know, when I think of an amazing storyteller, I always think of my grandmother. She didn’t make it far in school (because she had to work in the fields and on the family farm) so she couldn’t read or write the best in the world, but nobody could compare to her storytelling talents (in my eyes anyway! ;-) ). She brought the story to life, regardless of the topic, and made it seem so magical and real.

    Ah, the memories…

    Thanks for reminding me!

    *smiles*
    Michele

  2. kferrell Says:

    You’re welcome Michele! People like your grandmother are the true storytellers, passing down wisdom throughout the generations. The timeless quality those stories share are what I believe we all strive for in our writing!

    Kimberlee

  3. Michele Says:

    Absolutely, Kimberlee! If I could write even a smidgen as good as my grandmother could tell stories, I’d be the author of best-sellers! ;-)

    Someday, eh?

    *smiles*
    Michele

  4. Ken Allan Says:

    Kia ora Michele!

    People do like stories well told. There are many good blogs with tips for writing posts. One I came across, only recently, was Cathy Moore’s Making Change.

    I believe that there is a writer in all of us. But most people just don’t know how to write interesting stuff and make is come across as snappy, making you want to read more. Then there is always the born communicator/writer who doesn’t need any of these tips.

    Ka kite
    from Middle-earth

  5. kferrell Says:

    Hi Ken!

    Thanks for stopping by. Great thoughts about the inherent writer in all of us. Everyone has their own story to tell, some just haven’t let themselves be open enough to reveal what’s in their heart.

    The Tolkien books are on my to-read list, I just haven’t made it that far. Have fun in Middle Earth!

    Kimberlee

  6. Ken Allan Says:

    Tēnā koe Kimberlee!

    My hunch is that story-telling may be a genetic thing. We tend to think of bed-time stories as something children should hear and that parents should tell to their kids (and I believe they should!) They tend to be regarded (by some) as a chore.

    Human beings have been around much longer than writing – by far. Thousands of years ago, stories of ancestral history would have been passed down by speaking. A major part of the Māori culture, for instance, is the telling of the family tree and family history. Traditionally it has always been passed on by speaking and listening – no story sheets, no bed-time books, no encyclopedias.

    Much folk lore, including wisdom would have been passed down by speaking. What better way to pass on history, knowledge and wisdom to children and others than to tell it in a story? Perhaps in a rhyme or chant – who knows?

    In primitive times, the successful passing on of knowledge and wisdom from one generation to the next may have meant life and death to the family groups. It may well have evolved as an instinctive behaviour, one that allowed humankind to survive.

    So this is why I think that telling stories may be a trait present in every human – perhaps in much the same way as bird calls have evolved and are passed on in birds.

    Catchya later
    from Middle-earth

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